Thursday, 4 April 2013

The Man With The Broken Hearts

A snippet from my short story The Man With The Broken Hearts.


A year later it was Ophelia, who seemed to fall in love with him almost instantly. After two dates and two wild nights of sex she snuggled into him, kissed him and talked to him as if she had known him for years, as if being with him was like being with a boyfriend. He even felt like her boyfriend. Fabian wasn’t sure whether Ophelia loved him or just loved the idea of him; either way, she was very much in love. She obeyed his rules, knew how much space to give him and how much not to, but it wasn’t enough. One night, after too many drinks and too much thought, Fabian kissed another woman. To this day he couldn’t remember her name but he did it, pushed her up against the wall outside the party and kissed her again and again. It was only when she broke away from him, looked him in the eye and whispered, “Let’s get out of here,” that he knew what he had done.
            He didn’t go home with her.
            He told Ophelia and assumed she would want to end the relationship. She didn’t. She said they could work through it. They had been together five months. They didn’t make it to six. 

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